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Post by revontulet on Aug 11, 2006 5:51:37 GMT -5
A very interesting conversation, but... *pities her topic and glares the mighty Ilúvatar* We need a music room!
Mm... This is a song, so don't read it as a poem wondering where the rhymes are. It's a question for you, for this place.
Tell me...
I’m so sorry I had to leave again It’s not you you know it’s me and my life
You said ‘good to have you back again’ am I back? to whom I give myself and my time?
I feel like I’m standing between two walls I need to find an answer before everything falls
I’ve tried to live these lives like there was nothing wrong But, please, no more lies I have struggled for so long Tell me the way my life should be Tell me… do you want me?
I know it should be my decision but I can’t make it It tears me like a cancer
I know the answer my life needs but, oh, my heart is longing for another answer
I feel like I’m standing between two walls what am I to do when the real life calls?
I’ve tried to live these lives like there was nothing wrong But please, no more lies I have struggled for so long Tell me the way my life should be Tell me… do you want me?
Do you want me?
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Post by Eleniel on Sept 23, 2006 6:13:32 GMT -5
I read it a long ime ago when you posted it, I'm sorry I didn't get to comment until now. I like it and it makes a lot of sense. "I feel like I’m standing between two walls what am I to do when the real life calls?"
And I think it's about time you put up new lyrics/poems!
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Post by revontulet on Nov 5, 2006 13:17:56 GMT -5
I flow down on my chair, shut my ears from the noises around me. My head is a wall, this world is left outside of it. Inside there is music.
I want to close my eyes to see again fall into memories, dreams and when the world around me slips away I see the lights lights and people a person you I hear the music music and singing you singing laughing My feet moving with yours tired feet dancing tired but still going The air is a slight dream a dream and at the same time stronger than reality so old and familiar so new as I had just opened my eyes for the first time And when your eyes smile at me and you hug me warm I know that it is enough for me to love you not
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Nov 6, 2006 21:25:58 GMT -5
*hasn't been around in a while*
A lovely piece, which could possibly be in a song.... a lovely song.... you should consider song writing *smiles*
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Post by revontulet on Jan 30, 2007 11:04:22 GMT -5
These are only peaces which never became ready, but I felt like sharing them with you. This is what was running through Revontulet's head when she was standing between the two enemies.
I can’t promise to love you. I can’t promise to stay. I can’t let you hold me; I can’t let you walk away. I can’t promise to give my heart to you, for it’s not yours alone. I can’t say ‘forever’ or ‘always’, though they’re written on my heart and bone. I’m sorry I couldn’t keep my word. I didn’t understand my lie. I can’t feel joy of the day to come when I'm waiting for goodbye.
I can’t kiss him anymore now I’ve felt your lips on mine. I can’t dream of bearing his children when they have to have your eyes. I can’t say I love him even though that was true, when at the same time I would be thinking of you.
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Jan 30, 2007 12:24:25 GMT -5
That is indeed a strong message.... You should sit down and complete it sometime, though it does look complete enough already.
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