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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Aug 31, 2006 11:51:54 GMT -5
Dancing to the silent melody Drawn to the whispered call Two become as companions Unwilling to let the other fall
Our step is far from perfect Yet still we’ll know our place Promising undying friendship Blessed by God’s own grace
Struggles perfect the tempo Of our dance in life together Passing through testing fires Surviving life’s stormy weather
Though in the times to follow We may find our paths depart Our friendship sees no distance And it bonds our very hearts
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Post by Eleniel on Sept 23, 2006 6:05:12 GMT -5
Very good.. and very different from your previous postings here. I know that I can't just pick out random verses, but the first and the last ones are really good. The lines are so short, so it is difficult to say a whole lot on such a short verse, but those two are very well worded IMHO.
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Sept 25, 2006 14:01:47 GMT -5
*smiles and bows* Thank you, my friend....
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