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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Nov 6, 2006 21:30:46 GMT -5
A song I wrote..... Not much, but an attempt *smiles slightly* Dream (My Angel)
Life at times seems difficult There are moments you feel at fault For the everyday things gone wrong But remember they can’t last long So dream Dream and you’ll be alright Dream, dear Dream you are held tight My angel’s watching over you this night
When troubles keep you sleepless Know that I pray for this: That an angel stays there by your side To hold your hand and your heart guide
So dream Dream and you’ll be alright Dream, dear Dream you are held tight My angel’s watching over you this night
Bridge:
I sent my angel from my side Knowing you’re in need, more than I Of the comfort their song brings Oh can’t you hear them sing?
So dream Dream and you’ll be alright Dream, dear Dream you are held tight My angel’s watching over you this night Dream and you’ll be alright My angel’s watching over you this night My angel is with you tonight...
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Post by Eleniel on Nov 13, 2006 6:07:58 GMT -5
I love it.. love the lyrics....it's very simple but it works!! Nothing much to say about it. Really great job!!!
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Nov 13, 2006 13:43:35 GMT -5
*bows* Thank you *smiles*
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Post by revontulet on Nov 20, 2006 9:28:50 GMT -5
I sang it as I read it the first time, and I just love it. It reminds me of some Michael W. Smith's songs, for example Pray for me and Friends. It's just the kind of song I would love to listen, it sounds like my favorite songs. Do you have melody for it?
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Nov 20, 2006 23:39:19 GMT -5
Oooh, I love his music.... unfortunately I don't really have a melody to it, though I worked on it for a while....
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Post by Eleniel on Nov 22, 2006 4:23:10 GMT -5
When I read my previous post again, I realize it sound wrong. I'm not putting it down when I say it's simple, it was meant as a compliment. Simplicity that actually has a deeper meaning is difficult to write, but you managed!
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Post by Dhodrimme Rualanna on Nov 23, 2006 0:25:10 GMT -5
*smiles* It's alright, Eleniel, I took it as a compliment.... And thank you.
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