She is the Rain

[Isiltari]

Okay. well uh, Here goes for my first post. A poem. That no one has ever seen before. Its kinda sad, you could take it any way. I don't really know if its good or not... tell me if it makes you feel anything. Even headspinning nausea beacause it was bad.

Lighting cracks the sky in the most horrible way
Horror hypnotizing in the most beautiful way
Rain falls gently, hardly, musically
Like the girl in the window
Watching storms as if it was all she had
And often times it was
Seeing herself in the rain
Mournful and Wet
Seeing the sky as her soul
Shattered by lightning
Hearing the voices of thunder
Deafening her music out of her ears
She is the rain
Falling just that way


*kicks stone* not one of my best... But it was in word and ready to be copied...

[Dhodrimme Rualanna]

A different sort of poem, that makes you think a little, but still an easy read.....

[Eleniel]

"She is the rain - Falling just that way"
The ending lines made me think and wonder about the girl.
I would say it's rather sad, but overall a good poem!